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五年级英语作文及点评:My English Teacher

来源:英语网 文章作者:奥数网编辑 2016-07-21 17:18:31

  导语:奥数网给同学们汇总了小学五年级英语作文范文及点评,希望同学们的英语学习有所帮助。以下为五年级英语作文范文:

  My English Teacher

  Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

  【要领点评】

  这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

  小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

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